Dialogue film · Original AI-generated take

The Burnt Pancake

“A daughter teases her dad about burning a pancake.”

That was the entire brief. Takefox wrote the two lines, staged the kitchen scene and generated the Mandarin voices with the picture.

Review the original take

Dad’s arm touches the left edge. His daughter is close to the right edge.

Dad still holds the pancake on a spatula. The intended plate slide never reads on screen.

Original take10 seconds · English subtitlesDownload original MP4

The revised shooting plan

These notes came from the review of the original film. The next take is still on paper.

  1. 0–3sLock a wider shot. Place the faces near 40% and 60% of the frame, with room for both elbows and the tabletop. Start with the pancake on the plate in front of Dad. His daughter speaks first.
  2. 3–8sDad answers as he slides the plate one plate-width toward her. She waits for it to arrive before reaching.
  3. 8–10sShe stops the plate. Dad lets go. Hold it in her space for two seconds as they share a look.

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